self assessment: I think that the colours work well as they are consistent throughout. The images on the right hand side of the page link to the articles well, the large numbers next to the images allow that specific page to be found swiftly.The band and artist that i have chosen to talk about (Oasis,Arctic Monkeys etc.) also conform to my genre of british rock an would appeal to fans of rock music.The editors notes help to add a scene of professionalism as this is a common feature in magazines,this also enables the reader to gain a scene of the feel that the magazine wants to create. I would however change the boxes in which the subheadings of regulars,exclusives and editors notes by making the red stripes bigger to draw the readers attentions. I would also consider changing the red on big ben to green
peer assessment: I like the way in which you done the layout and I like the images you used and the way the background image is edited. ebi: in the text boxes extend the red part to make it reach at least the sub headline of each box you should also probably change some of the font to make it look more professional
Mr Permaul www: the text layout and colours are fine. not sure about the use of big ben. ebi: The biggest issue is the lack of ORIGINAL IMAGES! This is very important! you will lose lots of marks. use other images from your front cover and dps shoot. numbers need to be bigger. spelling!
self assessment: I think that the colours work well as they are consistent throughout. The images on the right hand side of the page link to the articles well, the large numbers next to the images allow that specific page to be found swiftly.The band and artist that i have chosen to talk about (Oasis,Arctic Monkeys etc.) also conform to my genre of british rock an would appeal to fans of rock music.The editors notes help to add a scene of professionalism as this is a common feature in magazines,this also enables the reader to gain a scene of the feel that the magazine wants to create. I would however change the boxes in which the subheadings of regulars,exclusives and editors notes by making the red stripes bigger to draw the readers attentions. I would also consider changing the red on big ben to green
ReplyDeletepeer assessment: I like the way in which you done the layout and I like the images you used and the way the background image is edited.
ReplyDeleteebi: in the text boxes extend the red part to make it reach at least the sub headline of each box you should also probably change some of the font to make it look more professional
Mr Permaul
ReplyDeletewww: the text layout and colours are fine. not sure about the use of big ben.
ebi: The biggest issue is the lack of ORIGINAL IMAGES! This is very important! you will lose lots of marks. use other images from your front cover and dps shoot. numbers need to be bigger. spelling!